Hunchback of Notre Dame
Character Sketch

Prewrite - Victor H.

(1st Draft)

Victor H.

The Hunchback of Notre Dame.

Hello I am Quasimodo I live on Paris and my home is in the Bell Tower. I saved the gypsies of getting hurt by Frollo hi is my master and he tells me that gypsies are evil. I love a gypsy girl. She dances in the streets. I wish that one day I will live in the outside world with humans I dress in old rags and I love Esmeralda. But she loves a soldier his name is phoebus. I Quasimodo killed my master Frollo because he wanted to kill the girl of my dreams Esmeralda. He wanted to kill her because I love her. She toke by my hade and tole my to live in the outside would

(Revision)

Victor H.

The Hunchback of Notre Dame.

Hello. I am Quasimodo, and I dress in old rags. I live in Paris, and my home is in the bell tower at the top of the church. I wish that one day I will live in the outside world with humans.

I saved the gypsies of getting hurt by Frollo. Hi is my master, and he tells me that gypsies are evil. I love a gypsy girl because she is nice. Her name is Esmeralda, and she dances in the streets. Esmeralda loves a soldier his name is phoebus.

I Quasimodo killed my master Frollo because he wanted to kill the girl of my dreams Esmeralda. He wanted to kill her because I love her. She took me by my hand and helped me to live in the outside world.

(Final Draft)

The Hunchback of Notre Dame.

Hello,

I am Quasimodo, and I dress in old rags. I live in Paris, and my home is in the bell tower at the top of the church. I wish that one day I could live in the outside world with humans.

I saved the Gypsies from getting hurt by Frollo. He is my master, and he tells me that Gypsies are evil. I love a Gypsy girl because she is nice. Her name is Esmeralda, and she dances in the streets. Esmeralda loves a soldier named Phoebus.

I killed my master, Frollo, because he wanted to kill the girl of my dreams, Esmeralda. He wanted to kill her because I love her. She took me by my hand and helped me to live in the outside world.

Prewrite - Viridiana E.

Hello I am Quasimodo I wear a green shirt and brown pans I have a master named Frollo. He thinks hes the master of Justice and makes me do everythink he tells me. I live in the church of miracles its a very big and wonderful cathedral church. I love to ring the bells because they sound beatiful. I also have to follow the rules of Frollo, bring dinner to him and I love to make wooden people. I live in paris, France the state of Europe were guypsies live. My wish is to one day be free from this church and go to the festivals. I have some friends that consiter me when I think that I'm ugly and master. This friends are the captain, Esmeralda, Jolly and the gargoyles. Wel I'm finish of telling you all about me I hope you like my life.

Hello I am Quasimodo. I wear a green old shirt and brown pans. I have a master named Frollo. He thinks he is the master of Justice and makes me do everythink he tells me.

I live in the church of miracles, its a very big and wonderful cathedral church. I love to ring the bells because they sound beautiful. I live in Paris, France, the state of Europa.

My wish is to one day be free from this church and go to the festivals. I have some friends that talk to me when I think that I'm ugly and the ugly stuff that people tell me. My friends are the captain, Esmeralda, Jolly and the gargoyles. Well I'm finish of telling you all about me. I hope you like my story.

Hello,

I am Quasimodo. I wear a green old shirt and brown pants. I have a master named Frollo who thinks he is the master of justice and makes me do everythink he tells me.

I live in the church of Notre Dame. It is a very big and wonderful cathedral. I love to ring the bells because they sound beautiful. I live in Paris, France, on the continent of Europe.

My wish is to one day be free from this church and go to the festivals. I have some friends that talk to me when I think that I'm ugly and when people tell me ugly stuff. My friends are the captain, Esmeralda, Djali and the gargoyles.

Well, I'm finish telling you all about me. I hope you like my story.

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Prewrite - Jesus D.

Hello my name is Quasimodo, I live in the bell tower with the gargolyes Lavern Victor and Hugo. They are my only friends until one day I went out to the festival of Fools I won the throne, but the people threw tomatos at me and Esmeralda came and rescue me because they tide me up to. I love Esmeralda, but she loves Pheobus, Phoebus is the captain of the soldars. But now I'm finally out od the bell tower, and the people have accepted me.

I'm happy now

Hello

My name is Quasimodo, I live in the bell tower with the gargolyes Lavern Victor and Hugo. They are my only friends.

One day I went out to the Festival of Fools. I won the throne, but then the people started throwing tomatos at me. Then came Esmeralda and rescued me because they tied me up too. I love Esmeralda, but she loves Pheobus. Phoebus is the captain of the soldiers.

Now I'm finally out of the bell tower, and the people have accepted me.

I'm happy now!

Prewite - Gabriel R.

I am Quasimodo. I live in paris a city of France of the continent of Europe. My house is the tower of the church, the church is very large and beautiful church is also a sanctuary. My job is ring the bells I make toys of wood. My master is so bad I feel bad the form how he treats mi I want to Esmeralda love me assted of Pheabus I want the people acep mi I feel so bad the way i am from my fisge. I feel good when I save Esmeralda I feel to good when I save the gipie from my manster, Frollo I feel bad when Esmeralda kisses Phoebud. I feel bad when I knew that my master Frollo killed my mother. I want to help Esmeralda so she can be happy. Thank you Esmeralda for helping me at the fools festival.

I am Quasimodo. I live in Paris, a city of France of the continent of Europe. My house is the tower of the church. The church is a very large and beautiful church. It is also a sanctuary. My job is to ring the bells, and I like to make toys of wood. My clothes are ripped, ugly and dirty.

My master is bad. I feel bad because of how he treats me. I don't like how he treats me. I want Esmeralda to love me instead of Phoebus. I want the people to accept me.

I feel so bad the way I am from my physique. I feel good when I save Esmeralda. I feel good too, when I save the Gypsies from my master, Frollo. I feel bad when Esmeralda kisses Phoebus. I felt bad when I learned that my master Frollo killed my mother.

I want to help Esmeralda so she can be happy. Thank you Esmeralda for helping me at the fools' festival.

Enrique R. (Prewrite)

I am Quasimodo and I have black shoes and brown shirt, and I wear old clothes. I live in Paris which is in France and Europe. I lived in the church with my friends Lavern Victor, Hugo up in the bell tower. My job is to ring the bell daily I like to see people and the whole city. I want to go to have fun out side. I was treated really badly, and Esmeralda saved my life. I was almost dead, but Esmeralda saved me from throwing me tomatoes and other things. Esmeralda wanted to see me but I did not want to. I did not like to see her because I had an ugly face, so I ran away

I am Quasimodo. I have black shoes and brown shirt, and I wear old clothes. I live in Paris which is in France and Europe. I live up in the bell tower of the church with my friends Lavern, Victor and Hugo. My job is to ring the bell daily.

I like to see people and the whole city. When I went to go to have fun outside, I was treated really badly, and Esmeralda saved my life. I was almost dead, but Esmeralda saved me from the people who were throwing tomatoes and other things at me. Esmeralda wanted to see me but I did not want her to. I did not like herto see me because I have an ugly face. So I ran away.

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Intro

Esmeralda

Phoebus

Gargoyles

Hunchback of Notre Dame

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