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This is the result of an exercise in understanding point of view through role playing, and using the writing process. Click on a student's name to read the sketch written from the point of view of the charactercontents

 

 

Javier H. (Prewrite)

(1st Draft)

I am Phoebus I have a very good armor. I am like a little bit conceited. I do not like to harm other people. My dream is that Esmeralda would be my girl friend and she would love me. I serve Frollo. He is my boss. Esmeralda is my friend and Quasimodo to. When Frollo wanted me to burn the city I put the fire in the water. I saved a child and Frollo's men started to shout someone got me in my arm I fell. Esmeralda saved me and Ithanked her. Quasimodo hide me in the bell tower.

(Revision)

I am Phoebus. I have a very good armor. I am a little bit conceited. My dream is that Esmeralda would be my girl friend and she would love me.

I serve Frollo. He is my boss, but I do not like to harm other people. When Frollo wanted me to burn the city I put the fire in the water. I saved a child and Frollo's men started to shoot at me. Someone got me in my arm, and I fell. Esmeralda saved me and I thanked her. Quasimodo hid me in the bell tower. Esmeralda is my friend and Quasimodo too.

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Carlos P. (Prewrite)

(1st Draft)

I am Phoebus the captain of the soldiers. I came because they called me to be the captain, and to declare justice. My biggest love is Esmeralda I want to save her from Frollo before he kills her. Iwant to save the people from the injustice of Frollo.

(Revision)

Phoebus

I am Phoebus, the captain of the soldiers. I came because they called me to be the captain, and to declare justice. My biggest love is Esmeralda. I want to save her from Frollo before he kills her. I want to save the people from the injustice of Frollo.

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